tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post2790883173859174340..comments2023-09-16T05:02:59.946-07:00Comments on Heroines with Hearts: Sunday Snippet from Jennifer's WIPDebra St. Johnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-657756076294280272015-07-05T17:11:09.336-07:002015-07-05T17:11:09.336-07:00A hero with a cane. Operation? Skiing accident? Wa...A hero with a cane. Operation? Skiing accident? War wound?<br />Ana Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12325215832587691886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-77493353138753089322015-07-05T14:44:04.758-07:002015-07-05T14:44:04.758-07:00Good idea.Good idea.JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-35260375458565780312015-07-05T14:43:51.855-07:002015-07-05T14:43:51.855-07:00Yes, it's part of my series, Debra. And me too...Yes, it's part of my series, Debra. And me too! ;)JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-9897199492508950002015-07-05T14:36:35.107-07:002015-07-05T14:36:35.107-07:00Intriguing opening!
Just one suggestion - when you...Intriguing opening!<br />Just one suggestion - when you first mention the teenager, can you give some brief description of her e.g. long blonde hair (or whatever) just to give the reader enough to imagine her. Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-932239587405431722015-07-05T11:03:18.855-07:002015-07-05T11:03:18.855-07:00Is this part of your series, Jen?
You know I'...Is this part of your series, Jen?<br /><br />You know I'm already dying to know why he has the cane... :)Debra St. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.com