tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post4025851103861632502..comments2023-09-16T05:02:59.946-07:00Comments on Heroines with Hearts: Checklist after first draftDebra St. Johnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-79553698057404933262014-08-18T14:40:54.874-07:002014-08-18T14:40:54.874-07:00Terrific list, Ana! Terrific list, Ana! JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-72560650123461909112014-08-18T13:53:49.674-07:002014-08-18T13:53:49.674-07:00Agree with Debra that this is an excellent list. T...Agree with Debra that this is an excellent list. The only one I'm not sure about is the 'external' antagonist, as sometimes an 'internal' antagonist can be just as powerful in blocking the character's progress. Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-24983274563374003812014-08-18T13:21:03.280-07:002014-08-18T13:21:03.280-07:00This is a great list Ana! Thanks for sharing. It&#...This is a great list Ana! Thanks for sharing. It's a good one to print out and cross-reference with when you're writing/editing.Debra St. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.com