tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post4225011110464095024..comments2023-09-16T05:02:59.946-07:00Comments on Heroines with Hearts: Sunday SnippetDebra St. Johnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-20391664169277442712015-11-29T14:31:48.563-08:002015-11-29T14:31:48.563-08:00A very good first draft!A very good first draft!Ana Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12325215832587691886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-17404773606060136162015-11-29T12:56:30.694-08:002015-11-29T12:56:30.694-08:00Thanks. It will probably be deleted and revised a ...Thanks. It will probably be deleted and revised a million times, as it's only a first draft, but we'll see!JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-83511022603610297412015-11-29T12:55:53.295-08:002015-11-29T12:55:53.295-08:00Aw man, was it that obvious???? ;)Aw man, was it that obvious???? ;)JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-79367177839897220932015-11-29T11:45:03.971-08:002015-11-29T11:45:03.971-08:00Good description, and intriguing introduction.Good description, and intriguing introduction.Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-37873364583635863542015-11-29T11:32:18.463-08:002015-11-29T11:32:18.463-08:00Yes, the cottage sounds intriguing. I want to know...Yes, the cottage sounds intriguing. I want to know why she's going to stay there. What has happened in her life to make her want to move into such a place.Margaret Mayo Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02191565514869927386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-91050124087812680312015-11-29T09:00:43.430-08:002015-11-29T09:00:43.430-08:00I totally want to stay in this cottage. You've...I totally want to stay in this cottage. You've described it beautifully. I could settle in quite comfortably there.<br /><br />And I totally want to know why she's starting over and is afraid.<br /><br />Excellent set up! :)<br /><br />Can I guess that the owner is NOT an old man and will be the love interest?!Debra St. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.com