tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post6586596099226659657..comments2023-09-16T05:02:59.946-07:00Comments on Heroines with Hearts: Snippet Sunday-An Excerpt from Miriam's Surrender by Jennifer WilckDebra St. Johnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-4006700642057371172015-01-11T15:16:39.749-08:002015-01-11T15:16:39.749-08:00Thank you. :)Thank you. :)JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-48001932336432794852015-01-11T14:12:06.425-08:002015-01-11T14:12:06.425-08:00I second Ana's comment. The emotions really co...I second Ana's comment. The emotions really come through in this scene. Nice job with description, too, without overdoing it and overshadowing the scene.Debra St. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-48862013003453149682015-01-11T12:38:14.818-08:002015-01-11T12:38:14.818-08:00Thanks, ladies.Thanks, ladies.JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-67785092086608468442015-01-11T09:25:14.970-08:002015-01-11T09:25:14.970-08:00I like the tension of the 'almost kiss' in...I like the tension of the 'almost kiss' in this scene! Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999125118927001112.post-21568314250782334672015-01-11T08:40:45.679-08:002015-01-11T08:40:45.679-08:00Super show of emotions, Jen!Super show of emotions, Jen!Ana Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12325215832587691886noreply@blogger.com