She walks into a lecture hall, where the new-on-the-job hero is subbing for his boss and giving a night class to nursing students. This is what he sees:
At first glance, she resembled a Nordic gypsy. Black
leggings under a colorful past-the-knee skirt that looked sewn from a dozen
oversized scarves. Hip-hugging, hand-knitted sweater with domed silver buttons
and mammoth pockets. Clunky felt-lined winter boots.
A cloud of curly
jet-black hair framed this woman’s delicate oval face. The ruddy color on her
cheeks suggested she’d walked some distance across campus before coming indoors.
Intense
blue eyes locked onto his as she stepped close. The scent of spring lilacs floated
around her. “Where’s Dr. Puissard?”
“I’m subbing
for him this evening. Galen Thomas, PA.” He held out his hand.
She squeezed once and let go. Her
fingers were calloused and cold. She wasn’t a typical nursing student.
His palms
tingled. He liked women who didn’t dress like mall store mannequins. Mysterious
women who had more on their minds than responding to their friends’ social
media posts.
Great description of Ammi. We can 'see' her' and also get some hints about her as a persom.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant description.
ReplyDeleteMy first thoughts too were how vividly I could see your heroine.
ReplyDeleteDitto on the description. I love how you've described her clothes. It really gives us a hint to her personality.
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