I’ve received a lot of comments/reviews where someone has
said they’ve started one of my book and then couldn’t put it down. It’s great
to read those comments because that’s really what I’m aiming for in my stories.
I consider myself first and foremost a storyteller!
Here are a few of those comments:
I was taken in by the first chapter and it was hard to put
my Kindle down until I'd finished reading the entire novel! (His Leading Lady)
It's a page turner with a secret hanging over the couple's
relationship that you knew at some point would drop on top them and wreak
havoc. (Fragrance of Violets)
It was again hard for me to stop reading this story. I kept
wanting to take another peak at the next chapter until in the end I surrendered
to the story and finished the whole thing. (Changing
the Future)
Paula has a great
style which gets you hooked from the first page and does not allow you to take
any break until you reach the last page (Her
Only Option)
I read it over 3
nights, because I could not put it down once I had started and ended up burning
the midnight oil for 3 nights (Dream of
Paris – this was in a handwritten letter from someone I mailed the book
to)
You
suck your reader into the story and each page pulls you in further. Page turners
and sleep robbers, that is what you give us, Miss Paula!
So it seems I
have created page-turners, so this got me wondering what it is about my books
that makes people want to keep turning the pages.
I like to think
(hope!) that my readers become invested in my characters and want to find out more
about them. It’s also occurred to me that what I was doing (almost
unconsciously) was what the soap operas do here in the UK (and I assume in other places too). They usually end each
episode with a cliffhanger – a sudden appearance of a new character who threatens
to throw the other characters into chaos, a conflict or problem that is
introduced or only partway solved, a moment of despair when you wonder how the
character is going to cope with whatever life has thrown at him/her. Soap
operas episodes rarely end with something happy occurring. They end with
situations that raise a big question mark in the viewers’ minds. What’s going
to happen next? How will this affect someone? That’s because they want the
viewers to tune in to the next episode.
The same applies
to our stories. If we end chapters with something neatly rounded off, or worse
still, the hero or heroine switching off the light and going to sleep, the
bedtime readers will probably do the same. We need to ensure our readers need
to find out happens next.
The basic message
seems to be 'Keep up the tension' and ‘End each chapter with a bang, not a whimper’! Ask a question,
foreshadow something that is going to happen (without giving it away), end a chapter with
a dramatic moment for one or more of the characters. Watch the soaps and try to
end your chapters in a similar way that will make your readers want to carry on
reading – even though it might be midnight!
Wonderful reviews and comments, Paula!
ReplyDeletePaula, every time I end a chapter, I keep you in mind!
ReplyDeleteThose cliffhangers are really important. I try to end each of my chapters with a 'hook' that makes the reader want to keep reading rather than putting the book away.
ReplyDeleteObviously, based on the reviews/comments, you've mastered that talent!
Thanks, Ana! I always feel thrilled when someone writes or tells me they couldn't stop reading!
ReplyDeleteLOL, Jen - I can't claim every chapter ending as a cliffhanger, but I do try to end with something that will make the reader want to find out more!
Hook is a better word than cliffhanger, Debra - the big question mark (not necessarily literally!) at the end of the chapter. I do it almost automatically now, I think.
I know you loved those wonderful comments, Paula.
ReplyDeleteActive verbs, good dialogue, bigger than life characters and an unpredictable plot contribute to a page turner. Getting all this done takes effort and persistence. I know your success with your page turners took a lot of hard work on your part.
Great advice for keeping the pages turning. I'll have to remember it as I write.
ReplyDeleteSarah, I love it when people can't put my books down - and even more when they tell me about it!
ReplyDeleteGlad you found it useful, Loni :-)
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