Ana's hero and heroine meet Captain Trimble, a minor but colorful character in my WIP.
With a stab of guilt, Stormy realized Blade’s tales of
working on the river were true. She’d chosen not to trust him. About this and a
lot of other things. Hoping he wouldn’t read her face, she turned her head and
peered downriver. “I don’t see the freighter.”
Blade tapped her arm and pointed in the opposite direction.
The freighter rounded a bend. Gray-black smoke and an
alarming number of glowing sparks billowed from its single stack. Its whistle
shrieked like a berserk ghoul.
Blade sighed like he was disappointed, but she didn’t know
why.
“Is it headed toward St. Louis?” she asked.
“Yes.
Stay close and don’t say a word.”
Stormy
looked around apprehensively. In spite of the late hour, or maybe because of
it, dozens of unsavory people milled about on the pier. She shivered and tried
again to button her shirt over her corseted breasts.
The
steam freighter glided up. It was much smaller and plainer than she expected,
having seen hundreds of pictures in Harper’s. And it was missing an upper deck
with staterooms and a promenade deck with well-dressed ladies and gentlemen
parading about.
In the very front of the freighter, a giant beam rose thirty
feet in the air. Tethered to cables at its peak, it was attached to another
beam that plunged straight down into the river. In the eerie light, she read
the ship’s name, painted on the side of the wheelhouse. Snagger II. She wondered what had happened to Snagger I.
A dark-skinned roustabout jumped off, tied a thick rope to a
dock post, and unloaded a small pile of crates and sacks. A tall man emerged
from the wheelhouse and wiped his face with a bandanna.
Blade hailed him. “Captain, would you have room for a
passenger?”
“Who’s
askin’?” The captain wore dark trousers and a ruffled shirt ornamented by a diamond
stickpin. His accent was deep South.
“Blade
Masters is my name. I need to get to St. Louis as quickly as possible.”
Stormy dug her fingernails into Blade’s forearm. He'd said ‘I,’ and not ‘we.’ She was going along with him, come hell
or muddy river water.
“What
about this one?” The captain jutted his bearded chin at her. “She goin’ too?”
“Yes!”
Her shout overrode Blade’s subdued “No.”
“You
related? I don’t take relations. Can’t stand the squabbling.”
“Well,
I’m going,” she announced. “Whether he wants me to or not.”
“Stormy, you have to go home,” Blade hissed. “The river is
dangerous. I’ll come back as soon as I can.”
“You haven’t explained why you have to go at all.”
He put his hands on her shoulders, pivoted her away from the
captain, and leaned close to her ear. “I think Jonathan Vance is threatening my
family.”
“That trouble-stirring snake. You need help, and I’m going
with you.”
“No!”
“That’s what fiancées do.”
“You runnin’ away, eh, girlie?” The captain’s voice broke
in.
She turned around. “Yes, sir. I’m sick of chores and small
towns. I want to live in a big city like St. Louis.”
The
captain’s gaze dropped to her chest. His tongue flicked across his lips. “You can
ride for free if you service me.”
Oh, he's evil! Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI didn't expect that last quote. And I loved the friction between the two.
ReplyDeleteCan just picture the captain - and I love your description of the freighter - excellent!
ReplyDeleteHe's awesome! The perfect secondary character...and definitely colorful!
ReplyDeleteI concur with Paula's comment about your description. I was right there in the scene. Nice job! :)