She was safe.
As Meg pulled up
to the ramshackle gate in the stonewall blocking the dirt path, she looked once
again at the address the realtor had given her. Two-seventeen Beach Road. She
stopped the car and got out, the wind from the Maine surf whipping her auburn hair
across her face, the ocean spray misting her skin.
Ahead of her, the
road dipped down and far in the distance she could see the roofline of a large building.
To her right and below her was the ocean. Waves pounded the surf and a rocky
cove provided a small private beach. To her left were rolling hills.
Not a person in
sight, and not likely to be either. It was just what she needed, and her first
step toward bravery.
Because only a
brave person could start over from scratch. Only someone with courage could
start over by herself, out of the way of anyone to help her. Only someone with
mettle would try again.
Pulling open the
gate, she made sure it wouldn’t close on her car, drove through, and closed it
behind her. Following the road down the dip, she came upon a small house on her
left with a For Rent sign in front. The carriage house. Hers for the three
months, with an option to continue to rent it afterwards. Light blue weathered
shingles covered the outside of the house, with white shutters and door.
Stopping the car again, she walked up the stone pathway. She smiled—plenty of
room in front for a garden if she wanted. And she did want. Gardening was
soothing. Plants made her happy. And the activity would keep her busy.
Tucked inside the
front door was an envelope. Inside the envelope was a key and a poorly scrawled
note. She squinted to read it and after several attempts, managed to make out
the words:
Heat, electricity and water are turned on.
If you need anything, call the number and leave a message.
Not particularly
friendly, but that was fine with her. The realtor had said the owner kept to
himself. And from the state of the handwriting, he was probably an old man. She
wasn’t planning to make friends with anyone but herself.
Returning to her
car, she pulled out her suitcase and unlocked the front door. Inside, the
cottage was dark and musty smelling. She opened the windows to let in the ocean
breeze and smiled. The place wasn’t fancy, but it was clean. The front door
opened into a sitting room with a brown leather sofa and two chairs anchored
around a glass table and stone fireplace. Beyond the sitting room was a small
kitchen with a breakfast nook. A bedroom with a canopy queen-sized bed and a
full bathroom completed the tiny but cozy home. It was perfect.
A loud noise made
her jump and her heart raced as she looked around for a way to escape. There
were no footsteps and no voices, so she peeked out the bedroom door and her
shoulders sagged in relief. The wind had blown a vase over from the coffee
table. Closing the window a little and righting the vase, she took a deep
breath.
She was brave. She
was starting over. And she was safe.
I totally want to stay in this cottage. You've described it beautifully. I could settle in quite comfortably there.
ReplyDeleteAnd I totally want to know why she's starting over and is afraid.
Excellent set up! :)
Can I guess that the owner is NOT an old man and will be the love interest?!
Aw man, was it that obvious???? ;)
DeleteYes, the cottage sounds intriguing. I want to know why she's going to stay there. What has happened in her life to make her want to move into such a place.
ReplyDeleteGood description, and intriguing introduction.
ReplyDeleteThanks. It will probably be deleted and revised a million times, as it's only a first draft, but we'll see!
DeleteA very good first draft!
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