Stumbling
to a halt, Georgina turned. Through the windscreen of the approaching car she
could see Leon’s shark-like grin. As she twisted away her heel caught in the
uneven ground and with a cry she pitched forward right into his path. She could
do nothing to stop herself. As if in slow motion she felt herself falling, saw Leon’s
look of horror, and heard the tortured squeal of brakes.
How
Leon missed her Georgina did not know. She lay there, paralysed with shock,
waiting for the agonising impact, her whole body screaming out its fear, the
screech of brakes sounding louder and louder until they almost deafened her.
She actually felt the car’s frightening nearness, the rush of air as it skidded
sickeningly, miraculously, past her, and the crashing of the undergrowth as it
slewed off the road.
Still
she could not move. Silence surrounded her now; the car’s engine had died,
there was nothing but silence. Silence?
Leon! What had happened to Leon?
She
scrambled to her feet, charged with sudden, electric energy, and the scene that
met her eyes brought fresh fear to her soul. The BMW had its nose buried in a
tree-trunk and Leon was slumped, unconscious over the steering wheel.
Her
trembling limbs were ice-cold as she waded through the bruised and broken
bracken, following the path the car had taken. It was by her own stupidity that
Leon was hurt. He could even be dead! Dead!
The horrifying thought made her feel sick. Oh, God, she prayed silently,
please don’t let him be dead. Please.
She
reached the car but the door would not open, no matter how much she tugged and
pulled. Through the window she could see blood trickling down Leon’s face. In a
panic she clawed her way round to the other side and, relief, the door opened
after a struggle.
“Leon! Leon!” No answer. She
felt the pulse at his temple and it was strong. Relief flooded through her.
He
was alive. Alive! She had to get
help. She dared not move him in case anything was broken.
But
as she backed out of the car he began to stir. He moved slowly, as though he
were coming out of a deep, drugging sleep. His heavy lids lifted and his eyes
tried to focus as he sat back in his seat and held a hand to his brow.
Then
he saw her and she could see memory returning. “You damn fool!” he grated, and
there was no weakness in his voice. “I could have killed you.”
And
I could have killed you, she thought agonisingly.
Wow. Powerful writing!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ana. I wrote this book over twenty years ago but it brought it all back when I decided on this excerpt.
DeleteOh, the tension! Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteI'm pleased you enjoyed it.
DeleteGreat excerpt, I lived through the whole thing with her.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paula, it's always rewarding when someone says they lived the story.
DeleteI was right there too. Great emotion...great sensory detail.
ReplyDeleteThank you also, Debra.
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